WIP Update – 09 Sep 13
If I nix the battle scene, I’ve mostly gotten the chapter finished. I did say something about tossing poor Cronos a bone, but, honestly, I’m liking the tone of the chapter as it is. I don’t think the battle scene would really add that much. You might see the battle in question from the other side in the third book.
I tell ya, the battle scene you really want to see happens in Babophos. It doesn’t fit into the main narrative (mostly because I just thought of it a few days ago), but I may well write up a little short just to portray it. There are actually a lot of events that got cut when I streamlined and normalized the story structure, which is fertile ground for a series of one-shots.
Anyway, I think I’ll just wrap up the chapter today and have it out tomorrow. Stay tuned.
Tags: Tellus Arc, Trident War Chronicles, TTWC1, WIP Update
Tellus Arc, Trident War Chronicles, TTWC1, WIP Update | James Carmack | 10 September 2013 |
