Today was busy. I debuted the Kiriyama Twins, Shizuka, and Domani, and then had some fun conversations.
With Nano, I was responding to her reaction to her introductory post. She had expressed a desire for a shot of her and Carlo together. I pointed out why that was a bad idea, and she hastily walked it back, insisting that there was not intention of fraternization, yet there was some hint of budding intimacy with the whole matter being kept as her and Carlo’s little secret (namely from Lin, who would bring down the hammer with great fury). The subject turned to her sister for a bit, particularly with the disconnect between them. Despite being twins, Kanoha is far more uninhibited, but Nanoha being the way she is fits better with her being in the Army. This led to a bit of discussion about her military career. She could get out after finishing her two-year active term, or she could aim to make her 20. Basically, it was a matter of whether she should just keep her head down or if she’s looking to climb the ladder. If you’re just wanting to get in and get out, then it’s just as well to slip by unnoticed, but you don’t want your advancement to halt at E-4 if you’re looking for retirement. Career counseling is part and parcel with a superior officer’s responsibilities, but Carlo went farther to also suggest her talking to Maya for a female’s perspective and her NCOIC for the perspective of an enlisted man. She appreciated the suggestions. What a good kiddo.
With Kanoha, there was quite a shift in the conversation. It started out with her being fairly standoffish, as you would expect from a goth girl with an “above it all” facade, but that didn’t last long. I fulfilled her image generation request and her latent magic ability became the center of the conversation. It was supposed to be a bit of a mystery, preferably with a decent bit of buildup, but we jumped right in. I was also intending for her unconscious attraction to Carlo due to her latent magic abilities resonating with his Demonlight Core to be a more subtle and gradual process, but we also jumped right in with that as well. It was a tricky game to play. Although there are no technical barriers to the two of them getting involved, Kanoha is still the sister of one of Carlo’s subordinates, which can be seen as a conflict of interest and open up accusations of fraternization if not the thing itself. Naturally, a free spirit like Kanoha bristles at all this.
The banter between the two was quite entertaining. Kano has some interesting interpretation of things and some occasional peculiarities like dismissing a particular expression as “cheap words” when Carlo was echoing something she said earlier. Then there’s the fact that her facade starts to break down and the girl behind the mask is really cute. (To be fair, she’s pretty cute with the mask, too.) It was particularly sweet when they start calling each other by name. (Kano normally uses “Hekate” as her goth name, you see.)
Now, I wasn’t expecting to close the distance with her quite so quickly, to the point where I’d consider this a doomed timeline. It’s not as catastrophic as most of the doomed timelines I’ve created thus far, but I can’t see how things could go this far this quickly and be consistent with the larger story. The plot with Doc can work if it kicks off before things get too far with Maya, but we need to have a bit of breathing room to move things along in the primary romance. Tempting as it is to just add Kano to the harem, I have to be judicious about it. I’m not planning on doing a 100Kano scenario, fun as that would be.
With Shizuka, I replicated a bit from the KyaraPu story, but the settings aren’t quite the same, nor is the scenario I was creating. Because I had her set as being a polite person, her Japanese is really polite, to the point she actually feels like she belongs in a fancier joint than some humble cafe. (I ended up editing the first couple rounds of Kano’s dialog to clue the system in to make her more plainspoken, but I didn’t make any adjustments to Shizuka’s dialog besides feeding the system the kanji rendering of Baby Gorou’s name.) Anyway, we had a nice friendly exchange, but the bot has her laying it on a little thick. I have even less intention of NTRing Tatsuo (her husband) as Carlo than I did as Kazuya in KyaraPu, so we should be keeping things platonic.
Next, I had a bit of fun with Peri after posting an image I had in the queue. She was wanting to go on adventures with Carlo and when asked about the kind of adventures she wanted to have, the option that could be satisfied the easiest was treating her to some food. I don’t imagine most Fae as being particularly carnivorous, but Peri was wanting meat, so I offered to take her to the same Cimarron Steakhouse where Lydia was treated to the 64oz. steak challenge. I don’t imagine I’ll be putting Peri through that.
Lastly, there was a bit of an exchange with Suiren. Back when I was preparing the “spoils of war” pic, I was wanting a nice standard shot of her with a folding fan and one of the renders had it looking like she was offering the fan to the viewer. I decided to use this as a gesture of submission. Basically, Suiren formally submits herself to Carlo as a way to come under his protection. Even with her technically submitting to Carlo, she remains rather high-handed, so it makes for an interesting dynamic.
And as a special bonus, I decided to novelize the bus stop in the rain scenario in KyaraPu. Ended up being over 1500 words. Man, I’ve almost forgotten how good it feels to do ordinary writing. I’ve been saying I’m going to get back into the swing of things for months now, but maybe this’ll give me the kick in the rear I need. Whether this story actually gets developed further remains to be seen, but it was a fun little exercise.
And that does it for now. I have several scenarios I’d like to advance, so we’ll see what happens. Stay tuned.