Dec
10
2015
I made some more progress on Chapter 16 of EM, pretty well wrapping up the dialog for the chapter. I just need to fill in the narrative and I can move on. I could’ve gone farther, but I got wrapped up in the peripheral materials. I can’t believe I hadn’t started an encyclopedia and timeline for the series. Stay tuned.
Dec
09
2015
I managed to wrap up Chapter 15 of EM and make some progress into Chapter 16. It’s possible that I could get as far as Chapter 18 before the weekend’s out, but we’ll see. Stay tuned.
Dec
07
2015
It was under par, but I made some headway on Chapter 15 of JJ. Probably won’t finish it before I switch over. Stay tuned.
Dec
05
2015
I managed to wrap up Chapter 14 of JJ. Chapter 15 may or may not get finished before the weekend’s out. Stay tuned.
Dec
04
2015
Contrary to what the title might imply, this isn’t going to be a broad discussion of racism in general or even to how it applies to my characters as an extension of “On Values Dissonance”. Rather, I was wanting to specifically address the Blackamoors of Junker Jorg. The name itself will elicit the titular cry of this post and it’s entirely intentional. Though the country of Byrandia is largely inspired by pre-WWII France, it’s rather plainly goose-stepping its way down the path of fascism.
The basis for Junker Jorg stems from two separate dreams that I connected. The one relevant to today’s discussion basically follows the events of Chapter 1 of the story. I was occupying the character who would be Root, watching all the various monsters roaming about in the ruins in the distance. One of the large ones, I noted, would’ve been voiced by the late Daisuke Gouri if it actually could speak. This made me think about Gouri’s role as Bask Om, commander of the fascistic paramilitary group known as the Titans, in Mobile Suit Zeta Gundam. Sure enough, who would appear on the horizon by the Titans themselves. The rest played out mostly how you saw it on the page. (As a side note, Margie was largely inspired by Lili Stecchin of Pumpkin Scissors, her torment quite possibly fueled by my annoyance at the idea of a little girl being a sergeant major. I was rather pleased with the justification I came up with in the story proper.)
Well, I couldn’t very well use the Titans in the actual story, so I took inspiration from the Italian Blackshirts, the German Brownshirts, and the Spanish Falange to craft an organization of my own design. I don’t know why, but I decided to incorporate Laurence Olivier’s disconcerting blackface makeup from his performance of Othello as a distinguishing feature. Now, if you haven’t seen the movie itself, just checking out a screenshot will reveal how off-kilter it looks. The funny thing is how much faith Sir Laurence had in its verisimilitude. Just look at this article to see how much he was applying his powers of observation (or attempting to, at least) to affect a genuine portrayal. Anyway, with that inspiration, it was just another step to go from a depiction of the Moor of Venice to the archaic term ‘Blackamoor’ that became the organization’s name.
So, yes, if you think the fascist gang of thugs from the story is racist, you’re right on the money. Ironically, the blackface allows them to minimize any potential racial variance in members (to the casual eye, at least), so while their rhetoric is virulently racist, they’re pragmatic enough to take in just about anyone willing to do the terrible things they do. I suppose it’s not unlike the yakuza being fairly willing to accept Koreans into their ranks.
Anyway, hopefully this post shed some light on things. I doubt it’ll spare me the barbs of some social justice warrior, but I seem to be obscure enough to be free of such attention.
Tags: Commentary, Cross Arc, JJ, JJ1, Junker Jorg, Miscellany, Post-Apocalyptic
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Dec
04
2015
I wasn’t able to post an update yesterday because there was some access issue with the database. I guess a few too many of our Russian and Ukrainian bot friends had hopped on the bandwagon. Anyway, since the last time we spoke, I wrapped up Chapter 13 of JJ and have made some decent headway into Chapter 14. Eagle-eyed viewers may have noted that I reshuffled the table of contents a bit. I decided to move the former Chapter 14 “Accuser and Accused” a few chapters down. It’ll make sense when we get to it. Finishing Chapter 14 should be no great challenge and I may even wrap Chapter 15 before the weekend’s out. Stay tuned.
Dec
02
2015
I managed to make up for missing a day by wrapping up Chapter 12 of JJ. If I can get another chapter or two knocked out this week, that’d be great. Stay tuned.
Nov
23
2015
While not quite finishing Chapter 14 of EM, I did at least manage to make quota. Now it’s time to switch over to TTWC3. Perhaps this will be the time for me to do more than just inch along with the story. Stay tuned.
Nov
23
2015
Another day of minor progress on Chapter 14 of EM. That goal of getting through Chapter 15 before the weekend’s out seems rather remote, but I managed to get all my homework knocked out, so that means there’s more time to focus on writing. We’ll see what I can get accomplished. Stay tuned.
Nov
21
2015
After so many days of brisk progress, it’s a little disappointing to report that I only managed a couple sentences of Chapter 14 of EM because I didn’t get to writing until I was starting to conk out.
Earlier in the day I did some work to detail an idea that may or may not ever see the light of day. Basically, I took elements of Jurassic World and adapted them to a Fifth Empire story about combat robots. You see, I really love the dynamics of the raptor pack in JW and I started thinking about an analog that would allow for human communication while still being removed from humanity, which led me to a dangerous combat AI rather unscrupulously developed and narrowly contained. Instead of a theme park gone awry, we have a military R&D program that goes out of control when the boundaries are pushed too far. Should the idea get further development, it’ll only retain a superficial relation to its inspiration, but I thought I’d bring it up since I didn’t have much other progress to report.
In other news, I may use the coming Thanksgiving break to launch the Else Arc I’ve mentioned in the past. I’ll still retain the “Five Arcs” label so I don’t wreck any links or search engine results, though. The Else Arc with be something of an unofficial Arc. However, as I allow myself total creative freedom with it, there’s some great potential. Stay tuned.
Tags: Cross Arc, Else Arc, EM, EM1, Everyday Magic, Post-Apocalyptic, WIP Update
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