Category: Umbriel

Oct 06 2016

WIP Update – 05 Oct 16

I’m not off to a great start, honestly. Two days of nothing and then I don’t even manage 100 words. The final three chapters of Akasame’s section aren’t going to get finished at this rate, but I’m hoping to turn things around. By the by, those 100 words were in his Chapter 4. I really don’t have that far to go, but I’ve got to actually push on if anything’s going to happen. I’d like to blame the mascot for insisting on my bedtime lately, but even discounting her, there’s several hours that I could be writing instead of playing games. Anyway, I’ll get it done. Stay tuned.

Oct 05 2016

Character Spotlight: Garm

The problem with writing Dwarves, at least for me, is that it seems very easy–far more so than with Elves–to fall into the stock character tropes and never really write the characters as individuals. I tried to avert this somewhat with Garm. In many ways, he is the stereotypical Dwarf warrior, but I made some effort to play with the formula a bit. Garm realizes that being nothing more than dumb muscle brimming with valor and bloodlust isn’t enough to win wars, at least not against an opponent that not only has numerical superiority but also uses its dang head to win battles.

One of the key elements of Garm’s character is his struggle with his upbringing with all its focus on pride and personal honor versus the necessarily underhanded approach he needs to take if he wants his people to actually succeed. I drew a lot of inspiration from Viking culture, where victory by craft is supposedly as valued as victory by might. How true this was in practice is up for grabs, but I used it as a starting point for Garm. The Dwarves lack the might to beat the humans outright, so he had to start using his noodle.

His arrangement with the Church of Holy Light is a relatively recent development. I started thinking about how the Army of Light could actually beat Xorgoth’s flight and I knew that just throwing meat into the grinder wasn’t going to do it. As I’d developed the repeating ballista to neutralize the advantage Corona provided at Kalonis, I had my answer. And by making this arrangement, I also gave a justification for why the notoriously anti-nonhuman Church would allow the Dwarves to return to their mountains. After all, even diminished from the Darklands campaign and dealing with an insurgency by loyalists to Daphne, the Army of Light would’ve had no problem mopping the floor with Garm’s forces.

I’m sure the attentive readers are left to wonder what the Dwarves’ reaction will be when they find that their cities have been plundered in their absence. That does take some of the joy out of their homecoming. There will be consequences, naturally.

It wasn’t until the latest version of the story that I developed any supporting characters for him. I particularly like contrasting the younger, more idealistic Burkur with Garm just to show how bitter and jaded he has become. He’s a man (or Dwerkh, I suppose) who’s lost everything and the only thing that keeps him going is the drive to get his people home and see them flourish once more. Anything that doesn’t directly contribute to this goal goes to the wayside, as seen with his callous treatment of the Dwerkhar who fell during the purge of Urgill’s forces.

Well, I guess that does it for him. We’ll be back in several weeks to tackle Scipio (not literally, mind, as he’s an old man and terribly fragile). Stay tuned.

Sep 19 2016

WIP Update – 18 Sep 16

Well, I missed my goal. I did make progress on Akasame’s Chapters 4 and 5, handily meeting the standard quota for the week, but I was kinda hoping to push through and finish the book so I could move on to The Brothers Pendragon. Rather than spend another week on it, I’m going to switch over to CeleKing1 and get back to it two cycles down. If all goes according to plan, as we cross the halfway point in TTWC3’s serialization, I’ll have the book done. We’ll see how it goes. Stay tuned.

Sep 18 2016

WIP Update – 17 Sep 16

I decided it wasn’t worth making a post for the mere three lines I wrote Friday, but I managed to make up for it by getting through Akasame’s Chapter 3 of TTWC3. That leaves me with one day to get through three more chapters if I want to meet my goal. We’ll see what happens. Stay tuned.

Sep 16 2016

WIP Update – 15 Sep 16

It was under quota, but I made more progress on Akasame’s Chapter 3 of TTWC3. After discovering the auto-battle option in S&D, it shouldn’t be claiming as much of my time now. It’ll be a challenge, but I’m still aiming to finish the book this weekend. We’ll see if I can make it happen at long last. Stay tuned.

Sep 16 2016

WIP Update – 14 Sep 16

I actually managed to get above quota to make up for yesterday’s shortfall, finishing Akasame’s Chapter 2 of TTWC3 and writing a little on his Chapter 3 as well. I’ve still got a long ways to go, but this is a step in the right direction. Stay tuned.

Sep 15 2016

WIP Update – 13 Sep 16

It was under quota and coming after a skipped day, but I made more progress on Akasame’s Chapter 2 of TTWC3. Maybe if I can resist the allure of S&D long enough to get in the time I need to drive on through to the end of his section by Sunday. Stay tuned.

Sep 13 2016

WIP Update – 11 Sep 16

With the chaos of my new job during the week, Saturday spent fighting to convert my laptop to a Linux box (great fun when they block USB booting), and Sunday getting distracted by my discovery of Shoujo to Dragon, my plans for wrapping TTWC3 didn’t come to fruition, but I did make further progress on Akasame’s Chapter 2. I’m going to stick with it for another week and try to make things happen. Stay tuned.

Sep 08 2016

WIP Update – 06 Sep 16

I’d love to place the blame for last week’s total lack of writing activity on my recent relocation, but that would be a low-down dirty lie. Yes, GBF took up most of my free time, but whenever TCotSL comes up in the queue, I seem to lock up. I may have to pull it from the schedule for the time being and replace it with something else, or just leave the slot open until I get another story far enough along to take the weeks CeleKing1 will have off. We’ll see.

In the meantime, I’ve picked up TTWC3 again with the intention of wrapping Akasame’s section. Monday I only wrote a couple lines, which is hardly worth mentioning, but I managed to follow it up by meeting quota on Akasame’s Chapter 2. I wanted to make up for lost time, but my current schedule requires me to be up earlier than what I’m used to, so I can’t keep my normal hours. Things will shift once I’m out of training in a couple weeks. Anyway, I’ve got quite the task ahead of me, so we’ll see what I can get done. Stay tuned.

Aug 16 2016

Character Spotlight: Carpos

In his original conception, Carpos was named Clement, which was supposed to be a joke because his personality was the exact opposite of his name. However, as I started to develop the backstory further, I decided that Solon would name his firstborn after his late brother, the one who was supposed to inherit the throne in his place. He was actually a fairly flat character until more recent iterations. Assigning him a “pawn” (remember that the characters are loosely based on chess pieces) in the form of Patrocles helped a little. And, yes, I’m consciously invoking the the subtext between the literary Achilles and Patrocles when I chose the name. I’ll leave the extent of their relationship to your imagination.

It’s helpful to compare and contrast Carpos with his sister Daphne. Whereas Daphne tried to find balance and harmony with her human and Elven halves, Carpos always hated his Elven side for setting him apart. He knew he could never be truly accepted by either community and reconciling with the Church to improve his political standing was a non-starter, being an ungodly abomination and all. While his powers were weaker than Daphne’s, he never made an effort to cultivate them either. He could have become a decent magic user and a slightly below average psychic, but as you see in his epilogue, it’s only at the end of his life that he realizes what he’s been missing out on. I would wager if he was at his full potential, he’d be an inferior magic user to Simona but a more powerful psychic. It probably wouldn’t have saved him, but he would’ve been much more formidable.

Before I started serializing his section, I half-jokingly compared him to Viserys Targaryen. His character was pretty well set long before I first saw Game of Thrones or read the book, but the similarities are rather interesting. Two petulant pretenders to the throne who abuse their sisters as a matter of course. Related to the Targaryens is the whole incest angle. In Carpos’ case, it’s less a matter of any actual attraction to Daphne as it is a realization that his prospects for a mate are rather limited. He would much rather secure a political marriage to strengthen his standing, but pretty much no noble house would be willing to give one of their daughters over to him. Besides personal prejudice against him as a Half Elf, there’s also the matter of the Church’s disapproval. Squicky though it is, his decision to focus on Daphne makes some measure of sense. Also, until she started to assert herself as Princess Regent, Carpos was fairly confident in his ability to control her, which was another big plus in his book.

From a certain point of view, Carpos’ treason almost appears justified. If you discount the legitimate threat posed by the Darklands (which he and many others did), then Solon’s call to war was a ridiculous expenditure of blood and treasure. Even taking into account the validity of the Darklands campaign, it crippled the kingdom economically and militarily. If Daphne hadn’t raided the Dwarven cities in the mountains, Zephyr would never have been able to afford the grain it needed to feed the people in light of the famine that struck while the expeditionary forces were away. Even if the Monarch Lich launched his assault westward, it’s likely that his body would’ve failed him early in the campaign. (Trueborn Liches in my canon ultimately destroy their physical bodies with their ever-growing power, even after a considerable share of that power gets passed on to the new generation.) The Spider Lich (the Monarch Lich and Arachne’s offspring) had been transported halfway around the world for safekeeping and wouldn’t be mature enough to lead the Chaos Dominion for years. Ultimately, it would’ve amounted to little more than postponing the fight for a generation (and a human generation is a little thing for someone with even a half measure of Elven blood), but it would’ve made Carpos look good in the short term. However, more than likely, even without the Darklands campaign to raise its name and martial standing, the Church probably would’ve still tried to overthrow Carpos as it did with Daphne, so it all becomes a moot point.

The original plan was to give Carpos a suitably pathetic end for such a big scumbag, but as I was writing the epilogue, his little turnabout took shape. I already had him scheduled to die about a week after his capture, but I knew Simona wouldn’t want him to die so quickly. (Think along the lines of what the King of Midland had in mind for Griffith in Berserk, then stretch that over the centuries.) As I had him realizing just how long the torture could last, the only answer was to provoke Simona into killing him. It lets him go out on something of a victorious note, which he really doesn’t deserve, but one of the running themes of the series is that, good or bad, you don’t always get what you deserve.

And I think that’ll do it for know. We’ll be back in several weeks to cover the far less scummy Dwarven warlord Garm. Until then. Stay tuned.