I managed to get very near to the end of Simona’s Chapter 4. In the previous version of the story, there was a lot more overlap, with single events being told over and over again through the perspectives of different characters. I’ve significantly scaled that back, but this chapter is one such instance, overlapping with Ionathas’ Chapter 2. Most of it is new content, though, so I don’t feel like I’m just rehashing what I’ve already written. Just two more chapters to go and I’ll be done with Simona. Stay tuned.

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