WIP Update – 23 Feb 17
I went through Chapters 12 and 13, adding some to the end of the former and making some minor tweaks to the latter, then started working on Chapter 14. Some of the earlier work I did years ago, had a clumsy perspective shift, something I used to do at times but now avoid in favor of a consistent third person limited perspective. Having to choose between Cassandra and Rafael as my active lead, I decided to go with Cassandra, something I hadn’t done since the prologue. In both the chapters Rafael appeared prior to this, he was the active lead, but here it was more useful to put Cassandra in the driver’s seat. I don’t think it’ll be too disorienting, but I guess we’ll see. Stay tuned.
Tags: BroPen, TBP, Tellus Arc, The Brothers Pendragon, Umbriel, WIP Update
Tellus Arc, The Brothers Pendragon, Umbriel, WIP Update | James Carmack | 24 February 2017 |
